That Girl 2 page Sequential Test

Page One

Panel one: Establishing shot of the carnage out side of the school. Kids scattered everywhere, scared to death in horror of the carnage going on around them. That Girl (in costume) is crumpled in the school bus she was just smashed into, she is wiping blood from her lips and looking at Battery who just knocked her with anger. Battery is moving towards her. Assault is standing there cocky and confident holding Rebecca by the neck.

Battery: Hurmph!

Assualt: mmm…theres lots of pretty things to kill on this backward mudball.

Assualt: Do your thing Big guy. Remember we aren't paid by the hour.

Panel two: Battery close up on That Girl. Arm cocked back ready to swing on her. That Girl is standing at this point with a look of determination on her face. She's ready this time.

Battery: Mmmmmm…

That Girl: *whisper* I'm ready for you this…

Panel three: That Girl steps into Battery with a solid hook to the face sending him flying. It would be nice to have That Girl in mid swing in the air (Battery is eight feet tall so she had to jump to connect with his jaw.), and Battery completely off the ground from the power of the blow.

That Girl: TIME!!!

Battery: Arrgh!

Panel four: Go wide as battery flies across and smashes into the ground picking up concrete behind Assualt. Who has to move out the way dropping Rebecca. Kids shoud be looking astonished at whats going on. That Girl is already moving across the panel to get at Assault.

SFX: CRASH!!!

Assualt: Holy!!!

That Girl: I don't know what you guys want, but you chose the wrong day to come to Town!!!

Page TWO
Panel one: That Girl catches Assualt before he can hit the ground, try your best two gt a surprised expression on his robotic eyes. That Girl is angry, and one of her hands should be crushing the armored forearm of Assualt. We can see Rebecca getting up trying to escape.

That Girl: If you ruined my chances with Timmy, there won't be enough of you left to make an Ipod.

Sfx: Crunch!!!

Assualt: You're gonna pay for this.

Panel Two: That Girl electrified. She obviously let go of Assualt with hair standing on end and lightning/electrical efx everywhere. Assualt is clutching his broken arm with his other hand.

SFX: VVVXXXXX!!!!

That Girl: Grghhhh!!!

Panel Three: That Girl smoking on the ground in front of Assault, battery is coimg up behind him having dug himself out of the ground, he's clutching his chin.

Battery: Hurm.

Assualt: It's about time, I had to take care of this little snot all by myself.

Assualt: that little nap is coming out of your pay!

Panel Four: Assualt gloating over That Girl who is on one knee below him. He has an arm stretched at her and you can see it morphing into a gun of some sort.

Assualt: Well, thanks for the momentary excitement…but it's time to die now.

Panel five: close up on that Girls face have the gun arm in the panel some where, beginning t build with energy. She is pissed. There should a look of disbelief on her face, but nothing too big or showing too many teeth.

That Girl: *whisper" He actually messed up my hair? Did he just mess up my hair?

Panel Six: Pull the camera back some. That girl has lifted Assualt off the ground and crumpled the gun muzzle in her hand. Battery is surprised as hell, and wide eyed in disbelief.

Assualt: What the?

That Girl: You are so done!!!

Battery: Mruf?